Editing for clarity
exercise
Using the "40 words and phrases that
plague student writing" hand-out, edit the following piece of writing:
Basically,
I'm learning to write. Writing grammatically is totally difficult because of
all the tenses, parts of speech, punctuation, etc. I kind of want to learn
irregardless. Each and every paper that I write has improved, in terms of
grammar. Firstly, I've been working on my sentence structure and also my
spelling. Secondly, I've been trying to get rid of awkward phrases that plague
my writing. I got a B+ on my last paper! Being as I've worked literally
hundreds of hours to improve, this is totally an accomplishment. Due to the
fact that my English teacher stresses the importance of grammar, every student
in my class is essentially learning it, whether he/she wants to or not. And
he/she had ought to continue to read a lot, since reading is equally as
important as writing. As to whether you like my writing, I hope it is
considered to be easy to understand. Well, I've got to go to work and/or
shopping. Irregardless, I literally must say goodbye!